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William
2/25/2015 12:55:22 am
long ago in a different land there was an evil overlord that wanted control over all of middle earth. Only one person could stop him that was a boy named Eric with his pet serpent rex he set off onto a journey to stop the evil overlord on the way he he saw something on rexs fang it was a ring a ring that had strange words that whispered in many tongues as he held it and then eric had a feeling that someone must of had it so he went into the galloping horse where he met a group of people one was small with a piece of fern wood on his arm the next a smaller person that had a double sided axe and finally an tall very tall person taller than a 6.3 tall basketball player he had pointed ears and a bow and arrows slung on his shoulder then when eric sat down with them eric asked is this your ring??? Then the man with the fern said i am tharathin fernen shield prince of the dwarves and of that ring that is my friends time to speak. Hello my name is Legolas and this is what that ring says. Long ago in ancient times there were many rings 5 to the kings 7 to the wizards And 1 was given to the ruler and that is the one ring to rule them all!!
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Ms. Ogle
2/25/2015 01:15:48 am
Have you created a plan for this story? Beginning/Middle/End, a timeline, a problem solution map or another organizer?
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william
3/9/2015 02:37:21 am
It was going to be me and erics fcoe book but he didnt want it :'-(
Jose
2/25/2015 12:57:31 am
Yesterday I was walking to my cousin house than I was hearing music than suddenly a dog came and I satarde running because he was trying to get me
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Ms. Ogle
2/25/2015 01:17:26 am
You have us in suspense, what happened next?
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Jaii
2/25/2015 12:57:48 am
If I was a Superhero my name would be Jaii-Man. And my powers would be to use Kirby Powers, Teleportation, Portal Making, Sonic Speed, A jump like Mario and Michael Jordan, and the moves like Sonic and Michael Jackson.
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Ms. Ogle
2/25/2015 01:18:06 am
What are Kirby Powers??
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Tiffany:-) :-P :-D :-) :-) :-) :-P
2/25/2015 12:58:09 am
What my favorite sports are.
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Amanda
2/25/2015 12:58:43 am
Chapter 1:
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Ms. Ogle
2/25/2015 01:20:34 am
This is a really interesting start to a story. I would love to read the rest of this when you finish.
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Elijah
2/25/2015 12:58:56 am
1.Cats vs Dog 2.Mom vs Dad 3.old man vs denchers 4.Xbox vs Playstation 5.girl vs boy 6.poor vs rich 7.blue vs red 8.Jordans vs Nike's
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Gaurav
2/25/2015 01:01:58 am
List
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Leeandra
2/25/2015 01:02:11 am
Sunny
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Gilbert
2/25/2015 01:03:00 am
Accidents in the desert
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Mathius :-) (-:
2/25/2015 01:04:01 am
seed
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Aleyna
2/25/2015 01:06:55 am
Cheer Competition
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Aniya
2/25/2015 01:08:05 am
Mr. Green
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Aniya
2/25/2015 01:13:00 am
I meant who might you be, Sorry:)
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Aniya
3/9/2015 02:42:01 am
Mr.Green
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Eric
2/25/2015 01:09:03 am
Animals. Monkey, frog, dog , cat, bird, lizard
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Amanda
2/25/2015 01:10:20 am
My weekend
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Gilbert
2/25/2015 01:22:45 am
Two packs of what of what
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Lilliana
2/25/2015 01:15:58 am
It is a wet cold and sluggish like feeling day. My body is wet , my hair is dripping with raindrops and my feet are soaked and full of mud. It's going to be one heck of a night. I am a tree named Bernard. I like to call my tree body parts human body parts like hair body and feet. Is that weird? No it's really fun though. All of my tree friends like Sally, Paul, Susan, and Phillip aren't even bothered by it. Bernard asked why they weren't bothered by it and Bernard said why. So they said because it's mother nature you can't stop her so good luck with that. Bernard sent her an angry letter and mother nature put thunder storms outside for a week straight just on Bernard. Mother nature stopped it and told him that she makes the wheat her reflect offmof what nature needs. Bernard finally understood and stopped being angry. After that mother nature and Bernard have been best friends.
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brianna
3/25/2015 02:27:56 am
nice job keep writing.
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ALEJANDRO
2/25/2015 01:19:18 am
Oceano Dunes, Pismo Beach
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Gilbert
2/25/2015 01:28:57 am
Sports I play
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brianna
3/25/2015 02:26:54 am
Janet was watering her lawn during a cold ,yet sunny, winter day, when suddenly something amazing happend. Her stomach was full of butterflies. Her eyes grew wide. And her mouth dropped. And there it was standing - A pink, sparkely, and short, penguin. She ran torwards it and picked up from its feet and hugged it. They did everythinng together.
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nathan
3/25/2015 02:37:48 am
this story is abuot 9 people andrew,leah,serena,teftany,alejandro,alexis,elijah,matt and dan and ther r a team of 3 and one team will win
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